It's nice that you used a good map to pose. I hate when people just choose some random ass map and try to make something serious when there's flying colors everywhere. Pretty good posing btw, nice use of the finger poser.
Sanchez: Hey, Derouce
Toldour: Yeah, Marez?
Sanchez: Betcha 50 creds the new guy can't shoot worth a shit.
Toldour: You're on...
10 minutes later
Toldour: Pay up, bitch.
Sanchez: Holy shit... never thought that guy'd be able to hit a bullseye on his first go.
Xander: Alright, good job, Backson... Get that stowed, then get back to patrol. AS FOR YOU TWO! Shut your gabs!
Toldour & Sanchez: Yessir!
Toldour: (Whispered) Put me down for 25 on the next guy.
That is, from left to right (Everyone but the person on the box is supposed to be a memory or "ghost."):
Clive Peterson, Mack Ferris, Minamoto no Yoshihiro, Heather, and Arthur "Stoplight" Morris.